The Emanation
Her tender eyes witnessed the
house fall apart at an early age. “Family” was just a mere word that she used
to address her biological parents. Happiness
never knocked at her door. Crimson’s wonder year’s dint seem like that of a normal
child. Innocence died way too early on
her face.
Crimson had grown up to be wiser
and wickeder amongst her peer group, having a strange perception towards the
journey called life. There came a juncture, where she fell in love with her
adversities. By then, Crimson was firm to give it back to the universe. With
evil desires, she embraced the venom that came her way.
Should the urge to kill the
loneliness be blamed or the temptation be rewarded with ruthless and merciless
deception. The hunger I saw in her eyes had no match with the deep dead ocean.
Let the vicious game begin!!
Interesting point of view.
ReplyDeleteThanks Manish.
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Nice one. Keep it up
ReplyDeleteThanks Akshata :)
ReplyDeleteGood stuff to read ... Keep writing :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Sujata :)
DeleteAnkit :)
ReplyDeleteIntense mystery ..
ReplyDeleteYogesh
Indeed !!
ReplyDeleteNice!! Well written...👍
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ReplyDeleteNice discription....
ReplyDeleteThanks Mr. Agrawal :)
DeleteNice written Bro
ReplyDeleteThanks Rupesh !!
ReplyDeleteGrt one
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DeleteGreat depiction of a Soulful revenge. However, the wicked game chosen by Crimson has obscured many traps in which she herself may fall into.
ReplyDeleteHer destiny is being planned by getting Swiped through her own judgements of moving towards Left where nothing's Right or towards Right where nothing's Left.
She may end up getting illusioned as the ball is still in destiny's court & the cruel game of betrayal has begun.
Crimson has reached the point where pain has less power on her physical as well as emotional side. She has decided to break free and pay the price for her own deeds. Having said that , few emotions are still alive which will in turn make her more vicious and stingy...
DeleteThat's where the beauty lies.
Thank you for such a precise feed back Mr . Varma I am amazed .
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:( well captured!
ReplyDeleteThanks but why are you sad ?
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