#TheOrdeal


It was a strangely cold night. Darker than usual. Skies appeared deeply cursed by the profane formation of stars. Bats flew all over, making awful reverberance. Untamed winds borne shivers with them brushing the lonely souls walking on the streets. That evening Emma was dressing up for one of the most crucial events of her life. She wore a beautiful black gown with net around her hands and shoulders. Her sight was such, it would make anyone fall in love with her instantly.

She was a part of a secret society called as the Council of Nine, where they worshiped “SATAN”

They believed that the Devil represents the mirror image of goodness. People loved him because he doesn't really want to torment your soul for eternity. He liberates you from this material world and takes you into his realm. Scarce who witnessed him, sung glories of his fascinating and irresistible pull.

That night was remarkable because the fallen angel had chosen Emma as his new upcoming mistress.


Comments

  1. Unknown19 June 2017 at 22:43

    Truely an insipirng one. Waiting for its next version.

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  2. Unknown19 June 2017 at 22:44

    Thank you Gairik...
    Would share my next work soon :)

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  3. ambika19 June 2017 at 23:48

    beautiful

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  4. Unknown19 June 2017 at 23:54

    congrats for ur new article this one is also so good n beautifully well written.keep it ups.

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  5. Unknown19 June 2017 at 23:56

    thank you Mr. Joshi ../ \..

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  6. Unknown20 June 2017 at 00:00

    best wishes for future articles

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  7. Unknown20 June 2017 at 03:29

    Nice! Continue the story .. Guess am going to get hooked on to this one .. Want to know what happens to Emma ..

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  8. Unknown20 June 2017 at 03:44

    Quiet a few have said the same thing, i will develop the plot and come back :)

    thanks for liking it.

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  9. Unknown20 June 2017 at 04:38

    Thanks Kevin.

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  10. Anonymous20 June 2017 at 05:05

    Superb one

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  11. Unknown20 June 2017 at 05:06

    thanks :)

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  12. Unknown20 June 2017 at 05:24

    Very well written

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  13. Unknown20 June 2017 at 05:40

    thanks Falak

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  14. Unknown20 June 2017 at 08:16

    Superb Yogi 😉

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  15. Unknown20 June 2017 at 08:40

    Thanks Sohel

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  16. Unknown20 June 2017 at 08:42

    Gr8 work YOJO,Keep writing you are so thoughtful.

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  17. Unknown20 June 2017 at 08:47

    Thanks PFC ....

    I appreciate your kind words.

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  18. Unknown20 June 2017 at 11:16

    Very well written,all the best for next one

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  19. Anonymous20 June 2017 at 11:59

    So far this is d best one
    - sanket

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    1. Unknown20 June 2017 at 12:03

      Thanks Sanket... With every article I only aim at doing my best. Glad you liked it.
      Cheers.

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  20. Unknown20 June 2017 at 20:19

    Interesting and well written...Time to write your own novel :-)

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  21. Unknown20 June 2017 at 21:21

    That's a big thing you wished for me !!
    Thank you.....
    Hopefully, sometime soon :)
    Cheers

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  22. Anonymous20 June 2017 at 21:47

    The writer has evolved , hope to c ur publications soon..
    From
    Yogesh

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  23. Unknown20 June 2017 at 22:01

    Big words
    Yogesh ../\..
    thank you.
    I will require all your support on this journey.
    Cheers !!

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  24. Unknown20 June 2017 at 22:22

    Amazingly written.. Short, but meaningful!!

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  25. Unknown20 June 2017 at 22:27

    Thanks Shibani...
    I enjoy portraying the content in a short and impactful way ...
    cheers

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  26. Unknown21 June 2017 at 05:25

    Ohhh Super interesting... waiting for the next one.

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  27. Unknown21 June 2017 at 05:26

    :)
    Thank you so much.
    Soon

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  28. Unknown22 June 2017 at 07:13

    What about 2nd part of the story... Publish early...

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  29. Unknown22 June 2017 at 07:13

    What about 2nd part of the story... Publish early...

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  30. Unknown22 June 2017 at 22:50

    thanks Ankit...
    lot of them have asked me to continue this one...
    So on public demand , i will soon publish chapter 2 on THEORdeal...

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  31. Unknown2 July 2017 at 22:04

    Curious about the next part.......

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  32. Unknown2 July 2017 at 22:51

    published it yesterday, have a check

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  33. Unknown3 July 2017 at 00:02

    Hey beautiful work... Keep writing... Wish u all the good luck in the world

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  34. Unknown3 July 2017 at 00:14

    thanks Sujata !!
    .../ \....

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