Musaa
Circumstances handed over a gun in his tiny hands
at a tender age. He instantly fell in love with the aesthetics of that lethal
weapon. It was like a calling that lured all his senses. Starvation, insomnia,
deprivation of bread and roof gave birth to the savage inside him. The bond
with the revolver was accelerating with each bullet he shot. Ripping people off
their skin, witnessing them bleed to death satisfied his gut. Slaughtering people
granted his twisted soul infinite vigor. He was becoming a well-known name in
the underworld. At the age of 29, Musaa had become the biggest contract killer
alive in the state. He was a mother freaking terror walking tall on the
abandoned streets of Mumbai. Inhabitants lived in constant fear of death.
Musaa was on
the pinnacle of success until,'SHE' walked in.....
I liked it... Loved these 2 lines 'The bond with the revolver was accelerating with each bullet he shot' and ''SHE' walked in.....' ... Nice one dear.
ReplyDeleteThanks Romali. I am glad you liked it. :)
DeleteWould have loved to meet the character in reality .. good write up.. 👍
ReplyDeleteIf you liked the protagonist , that mean my work isn't too bad. Thanks for liking it :)
DeleteNicely written
ReplyDeleteThank you Devishree ji ;)
DeleteWould love to know Wat happens later wen she walks in ...!!
ReplyDeleteCurrently I am working on " The SHE "
DeletePerfectly crafted phrases with a suspense to carry on. Your becoming quiet a writer youself
ReplyDeleteIt's all done with a lot of efforts and heart. Glad you liked it. Thanks!!
DeleteReally intresting about musa and more important that there is a hidden writer in you
ReplyDeleteThank you sir. That's a big compliment :)
Deletesuperb.. nicely written..
ReplyDeleteThank you Ronak ji
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