The Emanation



Her tender eyes witnessed the house fall apart at an early age. “Family” was just a mere word that she used to address her biological parents.  Happiness never knocked at her door. Crimson’s wonder year’s dint seem like that of a normal child.  Innocence died way too early on her face.
Crimson had grown up to be wiser and wickeder amongst her peer group, having a strange perception towards the journey called life. There came a juncture, where she fell in love with her adversities. By then, Crimson was firm to give it back to the universe. With evil desires, she embraced the venom that came her way.
Should the urge to kill the loneliness be blamed or the temptation be rewarded with ruthless and merciless deception. The hunger I saw in her eyes had no match with the deep dead ocean.

Let the vicious game begin!! 

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  1. Unknown15 July 2017 at 08:34

    Interesting point of view.

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  2. Unknown15 July 2017 at 12:19

    Nice one. Keep it up

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  3. Unknown15 July 2017 at 12:22

    Thanks Akshata :)

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  4. Unknown16 July 2017 at 01:08

    Good stuff to read ... Keep writing :)

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  5. Ankit Uday Basrur16 July 2017 at 01:15

    Well-written!

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  6. Anonymous16 July 2017 at 10:29

    Intense mystery ..
    Yogesh

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  7. Unknown16 July 2017 at 10:32

    Indeed !!

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  8. Chaitali16 July 2017 at 22:30

    Nice!! Well written...👍

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  9. Unknown16 July 2017 at 22:36

    Thanks Chaitali :)

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  10. Nitesh Agrawal18 July 2017 at 23:32

    Nice discription....

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  11. Unknown19 July 2017 at 02:57

    Nice written Bro

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  12. Unknown19 July 2017 at 03:11

    Thanks Rupesh !!

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  13. Anonymous24 July 2017 at 05:04

    Grt one

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  14. Unknown1 August 2017 at 13:17

    Great depiction of a Soulful revenge. However, the wicked game chosen by Crimson has obscured many traps in which she herself may fall into.

    Her destiny is being planned by getting Swiped through her own judgements of moving towards Left where nothing's Right or towards Right where nothing's Left.

    She may end up getting illusioned as the ball is still in destiny's court & the cruel game of betrayal has begun.

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    1. Unknown1 August 2017 at 21:05

      Crimson has reached the point where pain has less power on her physical as well as emotional side. She has decided to break free and pay the price for her own deeds. Having said that , few emotions are still alive which will in turn make her more vicious and stingy...

      That's where the beauty lies.

      Thank you for such a precise feed back Mr . Varma I am amazed .

      Cheers !!

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  15. Anonymous2 August 2017 at 05:05

    :( well captured!

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